Sunday, February 24, 2013

Rough Draft: The Role of a Mentor


           What makes a person successful? There are numerous factors that lead to success, including formal education. Teachers play a very big role in this part of students' lives. Depending on their relationship in the classroom, it could positively or negatively impact the students' path to success. There are a number of roles that a teacher can be however, the role of a mentor is the most important. Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson were great models that played the crucial role of mentor in their students' lives.
            In the movie, Stand and Deliver, Mr. Escalante was a newly hired math teacher at Garfield High School. The school lacked funding, authority, security and control. As a result, students were rebellious and had no respect for authority whatsoever. In one scene, the students rigged the bell timing, which caused the bell to ring earlier than the usual time. In another scene, two boys walked in Mr. Escalante's class late. The way the boys walked in class and their tone toward Mr. Escalate was disrespectful. Due to the situation at Garfield High School, the faculty, community and even the students had very low expectations. When Mr. Escalante arrived at Garfield High School, he noticed that his students lacked the motivation and determination needed to success. However throughout the movie, Mr. Escalante plays the role of a mentor and slowly changed  each one of his students' lives.
            On the other side of the spectrum, in Mona Lisa Smile, the movie centers an art history teacher named Ms. Watson at Wellesley College, a very prestigious and luxurious school compared to Garfield High School. Wellesley was an all-girls school filled with women from highly wealthy and well-respected families. The Wellesley college and community was surrounded by strict rules and traditions. The purpose of women attending Wellesley was to prepare them for marriage, children and family. Ms. Watson was an independent woman who represented individualism and choice, which was frowned upon. Any change in rules or tradition was deemed unacceptable. For example, a nurse at Wellesley handed out contraceptives to the students. One of the students reported this incident in the school paper and, as a result, the school board decided to fire the nurse. As a mentor, Ms. Watson challenged the authority and changed the lives of her students.
            One of the characteristics that enabled Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson to become good mentors is their determination. Starting with Mr. Escalante, he showed his determination of many occasions. The faculty and parent's expectations of Mr. Escalante's students were low. Out of everyone in the movie, Mr. Escalante was the only one who believed in his students and, for this reason, he was determined to demonstrate the capabilities of his students by teaching them calculus. To help prepare his students for the advanced placement calculus exam, he held late and early classes, as well as summer classes. The faculty was against the summer program because most of the classrooms were reserved for remedial classes. As a result, Mr. Escalante held his summer classes in a room similar to a locker room, with no air-conditioning and limited space. To show the degree of Mr. Escalante's determination, he offered class during break, offered out-of-school tutoring and taught English at night for free. During this time, his wife claimed that he was not home enough to teach his own son math. By mentally and physically draining his own body, he suffered from a heart attack. After a few days in the hospital, Mr. Escalante checked himself out of the hospital and continued to prepare his students for the exam.
            Ms. Watson's determination also made her a positive example as a mentor. During her first day of class, she was completely shut down by her students. Ms. Watson's formal education was looked down upon because she previously went to a state university. Her students memorized the syllabus and quoted the textbook word-for-word, when Ms. Watson attempted to explain various artworks. However, she did not let this phase her. Instead, she became determined to gain control back in her classroom to teach art history. The next day, she created a whole new syllabus and stunned her entire class. During this process, she gained authority back in her own classroom and showed that wealth, social rank and marriage obligations did not have positive effects on their grades. There were no special treatment for any of the students in Ms. Watson's class. The women were furious with Ms. Watson however, after every class, they slowly started respecting her.
            Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson shared a second characteristic that made them both positive examples for fulfilling the role of mentor. This characteristic is their ability to teach beyond a classroom setting and into real-life situations. Mr. Escalante not only taught calculus, but he taught real-life lessons as well. In the beginning of Stand and Deliver, the faculty and parents did not have much expectations from their students. Mr. Escalante believed in his students and pushed them beyond anyone's expected limitations. Not only did Mr. Escalante shown his determination, but he passed it on to his students. He taught his students to believe in themselves and strive for success, despite what anyone else thought. He also taught them to push themselves beyond their limitations. One has to push one's self to better themselves. Lastly, he taught his students to be independent. There was one scene where one of the girls were asking their mother to sign a permission form for the calculus class. The mother quoted, "Men don't like women who are smart." The daughter replies, "I don't want to depend on a man for the rest of my life." Mr. Escalante changed the lives of his students by giving them motivation, emphasizing their determination, encouraging their self-confidence, embracing their independence and challenging their limitations.
            Ms. Watson was an independent woman who wanted to make a difference in the world. The purpose of Wellesley was to prepare women to become housewives to accommodate their husband and future children. She wanted to show her students that there was more to life than marriage, kids and a family. One of her students, Joan, wanted to go to law school however, she thought it to be distant dream. Ms. Watson encouraged her to apply to Yale and become a lawyer while having a family. Joan got accepted to Yale however, declined the offer because she wanted to become housewife instead. Wellesley is a very elegant school surrounded by traditions and rules. In the college and community, there is a right way to everything. A right way to teach, a right way to think, a right way of art and etc. Ms. Watson taught the women to free their mind from the strict rules and traditions and think for themselves. The faculty was not fond of Ms. Watson's teaching style and questioned her educational plan. As the movie progressed, Ms. Watson was accused of "challenging the roles the women were born to do" (Mona Lisa Smile) by one of her students. Ms. Watson had no intention of disrupting the "role of women," she just simply wanted to show her students that they had choices. Towards the end, Ms. Watson was invited to teach another year at Wellesley under strict conditions. However, she declined the offer the decided to go elsewhere because she did not want to conform to Wellesley's traditions. At the very end, Ms. Watson's students looked at Ms. Watson as a good role model and mentor.
            Teachers play a very crucial role in their students' lives. They assist in playing the important part of guiding their students to success. There are number of roles available for teachers to choose, however mentor is the most important role. Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson are great examples of teachers that played this important role. Both teachers were placed in very difficult positions with extreme conditions however, both had the characteristics of a mentor that won the respect of their students. Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson both possessed the determination to make difference in their students' lives. In addition to teaching the subject they were assigned to teach, they taught lessons that had real life applications. Through their hard work of fulfilling the role of mentor, both instructors successfully made a positive impact on their students' lives.  

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